The essay answers a nearby question
If the title asks about certainty but the essay mostly discusses ethics, the argument may be thoughtful but misaligned.
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TOK essay checklist for prescribed-title alignment and knowledge argument.
A TOK essay can sound thoughtful while still missing the title. Use this checklist to test whether the essay is actually answering the prescribed title through knowledge claims, examples, perspectives, and implications.
TOK essay revision checklist
- The exact wording of the prescribed title appears in the planning logic, not only the introduction.
- The essay defines or frames key title terms before building the argument.
- Each body section contains a knowledge claim, not only a topic sentence.
- Examples are specific enough to analyze and connected to the knowledge issue.
- Counterclaims or alternative perspectives change the argument rather than feeling pasted in.
- The essay explains implications: what the argument suggests about knowledge, certainty, evidence, or perspective.
- The conclusion answers the title directly and reflects the strongest tension in the essay.
Common TOK essay warning signs
Examples are famous, not useful
A familiar example only helps if the essay uses it to test a knowledge claim.
The conclusion repeats both sides
Strong TOK conclusions make a judgment about the tension between claims, not just a summary.
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